Silently when you gaze at grey clouds
holding breath as a bird soar through the clouds
Secretly I look deep into your eyes
to steal ashy, lifeless, sinless dreams
And when you see me hiding them
You come near to me and say
‘Give them Life, Paint my Dreams’
I wonder if you know every of me
I wonder how you imagine me
I wonder if I am your imagination only
I paint your dreams with utopian love
reckon every dream with my breath
And when I come near to you
to keep them again into your eyes
to ablaze your soul
I can only see your closed eyelids
And then I whisper slowly
try to go through little opening of eyelids
But you never open your eyes…
I lay there besides you
waiting for eternity
Just tell me once,
when will you open your eyes for your dreams?
~Neilina



a beautiful painting. such a soft strokes..
‘And when you see me hiding them
You come near to me and say
‘Give them Life, Paint my Dreams’
my favorite..
Beauty! Very nicely worded.. keep more coming of this sort
what a great read! I thoroughly enjoyed this. Such beautiful visuals you painted in my head with this… thank you.
Lovely words for loving thoughts.
Your award is still waiting to be picked up by you
Ethereal images are painted by your words… captured and wrapped in the infinite weavings of time…
Hey…long time! Is everything fine at your end?
when will you open your eyes for your dreams?
Love this. My, you are a passionate, poetic soul.
–Pearl