Remember…that sound of silence
locked silently somewhere in my heart
And the dusk when you left me
for some unreachable horizon
And I, a dull crystal
waited there for you to come, my sun
to ablaze me with your sheer radiance
And I, a dull crystal
waited there for that rainbow radiance
captured within the walls of my soul
Till the night came to shun who I am
Remember that echo of hope in my tears
that always talked about inescapable love
And my fear of unimaginable heat of love
that can burst me into thousand pieces
And….
Finally in the deepest of the darkest night
I found myself scattered everywhere
beyond eternity, high up there, with hundred souls
I found my radiance with the wind
that always echo your platonic laughter
I, a lost dull crystal
always remember……
not to forget you
my radiance
~neilina



Wow!!
I am First
Finally in the deepest of the darkest night
I found myself scattered everywhere
beyond eternity, high up there, with hundred souls
I found my radiance with the wind
that always echo your platonic laughter
so cool !!
for sharing such a nice poem…..
I just loved these stanzas…
Thanks
Hey thanks Mahmud!
Lovely attempt. yet sad. A crystal remains crystal what if sun does not ablaze it. If people are not able make out the difference between coal and diamond; it is their loss.
But somewhere it is the loss of crystal also!!
So lovely.
Thanks Pearl!
One more gem… do you really need that right, left and center alignment? does that convey anything?
As far as my view goes, your words waving is so good, you need not worry about all those alignments
I just want you to do little bit of neck exercise
Thanks for taking care of my neck health
another beautiful post. i can really feel this one. its like you just opened up your heart and started musing.
Thanks Charles!
I really loved this one. It just touched the heart.
Sometimes I wonder…how you write this. I believe if one really feel the pain deep inside…then words come out. I hope everything is well at your end.
Hey Amrit…welcome back! Yup…everything is ek dum fantastic…hope you are also enjoying at new place!
I liked the way you used ”radiance”. Haven’t been here in a while but a superb read to get back to your blog.
Hey Thanks Kapil…nice to see you here!
neilina..
where are you? no reply of the comments!
am back!!
I can see the crystal swinging back and forth, dancing to the harmony of these beautiful words… you have done it again… taken my breath away
Hey thanks so much enreal for your words!
Oye an award for my sistah. A reason to update the blog. Come back soon.
am back, awards always make me to come back