There was something different that day. She felt what-if something happens to her tomorrow, she has never told him how much he means to her life even though he doesn’t feel anything for her.
She clicked on his name and stared at the popped-up window. And finally after few time clicks….
She: Hey….are you busy?
He: Is there something urgent?
She: Nope, nothing like that!
After few more time clicks….
He: So, are you back at home? Had your dinner?
She: not yet…have to prepare yet!
He: hmmm
She: I just wanted to tell you that you are very special to me.
He: Why? what happened suddenly…so, which movie have you watched?
She: *blank*
He: Don’t get senti on me, you know that I don’t like all this.
She: I know……I am sorry!
He: I don’t know what to say…..don’t put yourself into too many emotions and sentiments…..it pains later….am too straighforward!
She: Okay
She closed the window with a thought is he the one with whom she got engaged. A fear crippled her when she thought about her future with him!



hmm.. may be the circumstances under which he was acting that way might be the cause here! also, i feel there is a scope for this guy to be more polished with his words than being so straight forward
It may sound awkward for us… but may be the timing to reveal her love is a bad choice I feel… Only I know how hard it is going to be when a guy is so straight forward… experience talking you see!!!
Some characters from the male species are like this *sigh*
Well Well !! Gurl dont forget to play your part….he will realise the importance some day
afterall all have emotins !
It is not being straightforward. He is outright rude and inhuman. She just mentioned it to him that he is special to her. If not atleast he could have said thanks or..you know..!!!
And her fear is absolutely understandable….but this guy is not realizing her worth! I hope its not too late for him to realize this
Interesting post, devloping idea!
I hope she listens to her gut… and when the fear lets up on her crippling effect a little – that she runs like hell. This is the kind of thing marriages ending in divorces are built on…
but… perhaps… I am speaking too much of my own situation!
A very good read
Scary is the first word that came to my mind when i finished reading the last line.
You can write a sequel to it would like to know what happens next.
makes me wonder wt d guy hs gone thru dt hs made him so inhumn n insensitiv in life or is it jus anothr shade of a god giftd nature..the gurl shud follow hr heart in such a situation…
hy hw ve u been
Dear All,
Its been quite a while that I have been meaning to do this.
More on here:
http://deepsm25.wordpress.com/2010/01/07/new-cravings/
Thank You for All that Support Shown to me, every step of the way!!! See You At My New Address
Cheers,
Deeps
Chill…….i know exactly how it feels…very nice!!
She’s being honest about her feelings for him. Guess the guy needs to realize it quick else he’ll loose her. Nicely written. Cheers