I never imagined you
with lips in shades of blue
where spasmodic laughter
has lived zillion times
and
with those wrinkles circling your eyes
eyes that still hold the thrill of radiance
of early morning sunshine from pines
I never imagined you
with a heart of tickling heartbeats
that cloaks all joy of zillion daydreams
daydreams not of you, not of me, but of ‘us’
and
with those crimpled hands
that still holds all the secret promises
mesmerizing our eyes with golden twilight
I never imagined
those cheeks, blenched beneath freckles
as if love is curling-up in the softness
and then flying away into indigo clouds of night
But I imagined…………….
me in-front of you
lying there lifeless
And
I imagined
every tear
falling tenderly upon my heart
burning the flame
may be of love’s radiating brillance
And then ……………………..
I stopped imagining
Me without You
~neilina
P.S. For the prompt “One Single Impression”. Poem is about the impression left by the imagination!
Beautiful words here. nicely done.
Love the way you laid out your words here… and the last line is perfect. It could be interpreted a couple of different ways… but I took it as a sign of hope.
beautiful!
Very interesting. Nexgt week’s prompt at One Single Impression will be allow. I hope you’ll join us.
This is such a glorious piece.. simply, simply marvellous.. One of the best poems I’ve come across in blogland.. It rings with a pristine quality of sincere love.. the descption in each para is fascinating.. its amazing what you can create with words.. Bravo!
loss is temporary and sometimes contrived. love endures without fear.
a radiant piece!
beautiful!!
you did great!
i love osi too!
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nice one…i am feeling the words…
simply mesmarising….noneed of other words!!
i really love this. this is so passionate. this is what i like to read. passion. beautirully expressed.