Today the topic on Sunday Scribbling is ‘Grateful’. Without allowing my brain to do much exercise, I am here with these lines…………
If today you
will come
will hold my hand,
will take me to heaven
will then give-up in-between
then a kiss will fly from this dying soul…….
I am grateful for this freefall!
If today you
will come
will hypnotize my roses
will make me to close eyes
will then crush all my roses
then a last breath will sleep on this rose bed…..
I am grateful for my every last breath!
If today you
never come
never hope can smile behind grey clouds
never life can rest in lap of vibrant death
never thunder can dilute in angelic silence
never Can I be you, never You can be I…….
I am grateful for every of you in me!
liked the last line a lot, every of you in me..sounds really good
Neilina – Thanks Mr.Rambler!
This is really nice! A refreshing departure from the “I am grateful for…” format others (including myself) have used.
Neilina – Thanks LJ! 🙂
Nice work, it’s vivid and real!
Neilina – Thanks Tumblewords!
That is so beautiful, really!
Also, thank you for your lovely words on my blog!
Neilina – Thanks everyday!
Nice piece….
agree with rambler…. liked the last line a lot!
Neilina – Thanks Gurl!
so deep….(or sud i say difficult to understand? hehe…kidding…)good that you arnt giving ur brain much exercise 😀
Neilina – Yeah, but I am making it to do some aerobics! 😀
a beautiful thought!